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On one sunny day on Wednesday, their was a camp for year 5 & 6 out on the field. While the other class and that were doing work the year 5 & 6 were on camp having so much fun.
When we were at camp their were so much people their I didn’t even bother to count how much people their were. Camp started on Wednesday and ended at 3:00 o,clock on Friday, the teachers that were their were Miss Tuia , Miss Parrant, Mr Somerville, Mrs Sio, Miss west, Whaea Pania, Mr Jacobson, Mr Goodwin, and all of those other teachers. My group was called Tamaiti Malose and My two camp leaders names were called Norah-jade,and Siosua. We had camp on the field so mainly all of the activities were on the field witch was pretty amazing. We did kayaking on the field and we did scooting and skate boarding in the hall and when we had free time we got to play with the sports gear and that on the field or just play on the park.
Overall all of the activities I did were really awesome but my most favorite My highlight was when we went to sleep and when we woke up to have Breakfast in the morning. Cause it was yummy when I got to eat Breakfast.
My second favorite highlight was when we went to slip and slid cause after I had a turn on slip and slide. Mr Somerville gave me the hose and I got to skirt every one who went on the long distance slide. Witch was pretty awesome and cool.
But overall I would like to thank all of my the helpers because with out their help we wouldn’t of had a awesome and cool camp. I had so much fun at camp so thank you to all the helpers and parents for helping setting up this camp.
What I learnt about myself at camp was we should help year 5 about camp and show them around and year 6 should show the example to year 5 at camp. Thank you everyone who helped make this wonderful camp we wouldn’t of done it with out you thank you.
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We used a template to help us think and design our paragraph wile we wrote our sentences
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