Tuesday, 26 March 2019
Turbulence
Walt:Use stuff we already know to help us infer from the story.
Task Description:
This is my own work about a boy that gets to experience turbulence. And this is a really cool story that people can learn about what happens sometimes in a plane.
Task Description:
This is my own work about a boy that gets to experience turbulence. And this is a really cool story that people can learn about what happens sometimes in a plane.
Wednesday, 20 March 2019
Book Review
Walt:use stuff we already know to help us infer from the story.
Task Description:
This my second book review but it is kind of a different one to my other book review that I made but i hope you enjoy my work and thank you.
This my second book review but it is kind of a different one to my other book review that I made but i hope you enjoy my work and thank you.
Pass the story version 1
WALT: Punctuate our work
Original version:
Once upon a time their was a wouderest person that lived in a lost jungle and that person’s name was shaina. When shaina and her dad went hunting they saw something misterious in the woods it, had a lite read tail with a dragons beak and it had a strange roar and it was really scared. She sarted to run and dad they was screming so loud he like ahhhhhhhhhhhh. But the dragon was nice so suddenly shaina walked towards the dragon.shaina slowly waked towards the dragon that looked hungy. The dragon started to starved, shaina gave some food to the dragon. As soon as she gave him food the dragon disappeard and went back to its home and also what was cool was when she gave him food he turned into the colour purple then he went back. Then shaina and her dad also went back home and had dinner.
Edited version
Once upon a time, in a far far away land where there was only two people that live on that land. Their was a wonder-est person that lived in a lost Jungle and that person’s name was Shaina. When Shaina and her Dad went hunting they saw something mysterious in the woods it, had a lite read tail with a Dragons beak and it had a strange roar and it was really scared. She started to run and Dad was screaming so loud he was like Ahhhhhhhhhhhh. But the Dragon was nice so suddenly Shaina walked towards the Dragon. Shaina slowly waked towards the Dragon that looked hungry. The Dragon started to starved, Shaina gave some food to the Dragon. As soon as she gave him food the Dragon disappeared and went back to its home and also what was cool was when she gave him food he turned into the color purple then he went back. Then Shaina and her dad also went back home and had dinner. At the end they lived haply ever after and. The Dragon got to live his wonder-est life.
THE END
Task Description:
We played a game called' pass the story.' We would write a little bit of the story, and then pass it to the person next to us. They would the continue on the story. After the story was finished, we edited it to make sure it was punctuated properly.
Original version:
Once upon a time their was a wouderest person that lived in a lost jungle and that person’s name was shaina. When shaina and her dad went hunting they saw something misterious in the woods it, had a lite read tail with a dragons beak and it had a strange roar and it was really scared. She sarted to run and dad they was screming so loud he like ahhhhhhhhhhhh. But the dragon was nice so suddenly shaina walked towards the dragon.shaina slowly waked towards the dragon that looked hungy. The dragon started to starved, shaina gave some food to the dragon. As soon as she gave him food the dragon disappeard and went back to its home and also what was cool was when she gave him food he turned into the colour purple then he went back. Then shaina and her dad also went back home and had dinner.
Edited version
Once upon a time, in a far far away land where there was only two people that live on that land. Their was a wonder-est person that lived in a lost Jungle and that person’s name was Shaina. When Shaina and her Dad went hunting they saw something mysterious in the woods it, had a lite read tail with a Dragons beak and it had a strange roar and it was really scared. She started to run and Dad was screaming so loud he was like Ahhhhhhhhhhhh. But the Dragon was nice so suddenly Shaina walked towards the Dragon. Shaina slowly waked towards the Dragon that looked hungry. The Dragon started to starved, Shaina gave some food to the Dragon. As soon as she gave him food the Dragon disappeared and went back to its home and also what was cool was when she gave him food he turned into the color purple then he went back. Then Shaina and her dad also went back home and had dinner. At the end they lived haply ever after and. The Dragon got to live his wonder-est life.
THE END
Task Description:
We played a game called' pass the story.' We would write a little bit of the story, and then pass it to the person next to us. They would the continue on the story. After the story was finished, we edited it to make sure it was punctuated properly.
Story review
Walt: review a story that we have read.
This is my own reading work witch is about a story review and that is what my reading work is about and it is all about reading and reading.
Thursday, 7 February 2019
Waitangi Day
WALT: use the structure of a recount to write about a Waitangi day highlight.
Task Description: For this task we used a template given to us by Mr Goodwin. To write about what happen on waitangi day on our blog. we had to think about something that we did for waitangi day and something that was interesting . About Waitangi .
Tuesday, 5 February 2019
About me for 2019
Walt: write about ourselves on the internet in a cyber smart way
Kia ora. My name is Precious and I am a year 6 at Pt England School . My class is room 7 and my teacher is Mr Goodwin. My favorite things to do is to play with my Friends and to eat yummy yummy Pizza and Chinese food. I also like to ride on my Bike and Scooter and I love to hang out at the Beach with my Family or Next door Neighbor Friends. My favorite Sport Is Netball cause everybody in my team is my friend and I enjoy playing Netball enjoy playing with my friends next door outside and these are the things I enjoy doing. In my life. My Enjoyable thing to do is to spend time with my family but if they are to busy I sometimes go to my Aunts House and cook and play with my cousin and I have so much fun with them. The End.
Kia ora. My name is Precious and I am a year 6 at Pt England School . My class is room 7 and my teacher is Mr Goodwin. My favorite things to do is to play with my Friends and to eat yummy yummy Pizza and Chinese food. I also like to ride on my Bike and Scooter and I love to hang out at the Beach with my Family or Next door Neighbor Friends. My favorite Sport Is Netball cause everybody in my team is my friend and I enjoy playing Netball enjoy playing with my friends next door outside and these are the things I enjoy doing. In my life. My Enjoyable thing to do is to spend time with my family but if they are to busy I sometimes go to my Aunts House and cook and play with my cousin and I have so much fun with them. The End.
Task description:
for this task we used template given to us by Mr Goodwin to write about ourselves for the about me section on our blog. we had to think about our different interest, hobbies, and information about our-selves in a way that was cyber smart
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