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Wednesday 7 September 2016

The toy factory

At the toy factory had many many toys like dragon  toys. The was a boy called Theodore. Theodore always wanted a pet he found something on the window and in the morning when the sun came out Theodore   went really close and the little thing opened his eyes and theodore all most fell down a hearted his back after that he puted a balloon on the bird's wings a night Theodore letted go of the rope and  Theodore  went to the factory to find another pet.


2 comments:

  1. Hi precious I really like your writing and your picture. But can you put more full stops in your writing.
    But I still like your pics and writhing.

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